In what ways does
Major use rhetoric in his speech and what impact does this have on the animals?
Old
Major’s speech aim is persuade and convince the animals that the bad treatment
they receive from Mr. Jones must end. His only way of achieving his goal was
using rhetorical devices such as contrast, rhetorical questions and tricolon.
The
rhetorical questions Old Major use, make the animals think about the suffering
conditions they are living because of human treatments. As we can see on page
(p5) “And you, hens, how many eggs have you laid in this last year, and how
many of those ever hatched into chickens?” This shows how Mr. Jones takes
benefit of the products animal provide, for human consumption. In this way Old
Major persuades the animals to carry out a rebellion against human because its
time that animals be free and work for their own interest.
Old
Major use contrast to describe the huge difference between the humans and
animals nature. He wants them to realize that humans trained animals to work according
only to their interest. “Man serves the interest of no creature except himself.
And among us animals let there be perfect unity, perfect comradeship in the
struggle” (p6). In this quote Old Major says that the humans only see from
their own interest, they don’t care about others besides them, on the other had
animals are more united, they put aside their needs and take as a priority the
needs of the others.
Tricolon
is use to give examples to demonstrate the bad treatment animals receive. He wants that the animals understand that the only animal enemy is the
humans, because they take advantage of the animals for their own benefit. “To that horror we all must come-cows, pigs,
hens, sheep, everyone” (p5). In this quotation we can see how Old Major shows
them the unfortunate future that awaits to every one of the animals in the farm
if they don’t do something to prevent it, as soon as possible.
In
brief Old words Major uses the rhetorical devices to encourage the animals to
carry out a revolution against humans. He thinks its time that the animals be
free and work for their own interest. Humans only look for their interest taking advantages of what animals provide.
This is excellent work. You have chosen good examples of each rhetorical device and explained clearly what Old Major is trying to tell the animals, and why each device is the most effective way to deliver his message to them.
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