March 19th, 1945
ANIMAL FARM NEWS
By: Soraya Mazzetti
Finally: the
Admirable Animals Show The Other Side Of The Coin
(1)Farmers with weapons on hand wanted
to get back the farm no matter what it cost
Yesterday in the Battle of Cowshed, unfortunately our comrade, the
sheep, was killed at hands of the brutal humans when he was doing the
honorable and admirable task of enforcing our rights. Without a doubt he is an inspiration to all of us, it’s thanks to him and the courage of Boxer ‘the
hero’ that we achieve the great dream that once had Old Major, before
dying.Today our comrade the sheep will receive a solemn funeral, a little
speech by Snowball and military decoration of ‘Animal Hero, Second Class’ for his valuable exploits.
(2) Ducks were abused by the brutal humans
“War is war. The only good human being is a dead one.” said Snowball
without mincing words, in the recent meeting we had with him. Snowball told us
with lots of detail the events that take place in the Battle of the Cowshed,
how he planed this well organized ambush against humans with strategies from
the book of the famous writer Julius Caesar’s campaigns, as he was in charge of
the defensive operations and how ‘Animal farm’ succeed.
He wasn't tired of repeating hundreds of times that he was really
proud of his comrades as they quickly obeyed his orders and gave heart and soul
to achieve the victory.
(3) Dead sheep in his courageous exploit
The general Alcatraz, an expert in war strategies and defensive
operations since he participated in the Second World War, explained to us that
the victory was due to the animals’ well organized strategies and firm
leadership; all followed the orders in couple minutes without questioning.
Bibliography
(1 and 2) Halas and Batchelor animation (1954).Animal Farm movie .Retrieved
September 2, 2013
(3) Allan. K (photographer) .Dead sheep audience-
Wales (photograph). Retrieved September 2, 2013, from: www.krisallan.com
This is superb work Soraya, very well done. The style is emotive, journalistic, and convincing, and your sympathies as a reporter are clear.
ResponderEliminarYou have selected and captioned your images well and your headline is attention-grabbing.
Your writing is good, but you must continue to carefully and thoroughly double check your verb tenses and agreement, as well as your spelling.
The writing style is excellent, and phrases such as, "Without mincing his words" and, "Giving heart and soul..." are well chosen and used to great effect.